| Fear the darkness, fear me. |


Power TripI see you, Grab your hair, Shove you against the wall, And hiss, Dont you ever fucking insult me. You fight back until Mother forces us apart, You in pain and scared but outraged, I, cold and calm and breathing raggedly in my rage. This isnt the first time, Nor will it be the last, I fear, My darling braht.Power Trip
I say this with sarcasm, For what truth is there to be spoken in this household? You dont know, Just how fucked up I am. I watch the world through glazed, glaring eyes. You know this. I watch this house


PuddingThe world is odd. Of that there is no doubt. The idea of reality is one that is both sickening and rectifying. It can cure some and then it can ruin the lives of those who live in surrealistic realms. I fall into this second category, or at the doctors say I do. I am labeled schizophrenic by them, them laughing behind my back. I scoff and smirk at them, because I am not insane. They merely believe me to be.Pudding
Tell me how hearing voices makes one insane. Everyone hears at least one voice, that one thus entitled his or her conscience. Just because I happen to hear more then one voice, and just becau
| Fear the darkness, fear me. |


A ClearingYesterday There was no joy There was no happiness We were miserable Things were bad Weren't looking up Dark skies Disappointing facesA Clearing
Apathy, lethargy Disgust, distress All so bad Thunder deafened us Lightning, it blinded us Rain drowned us in its wake
Today There is a sun There is light We don't have to wait Not anymore It's all we wanted A clear sky Won't fall again It's all too well No worries No stress No weight on our backs We came through Wings sprouting An inner
| I welcome shades of gray openly. Anachronistic life unending. Unnecessary strain compounding. The failing cognition resounding. I'm here all alone, wondering how it all will end. Fighting in vain as into the darkness I descend. Waiting for light that I know I'll never see. Desperate for silence once again. Asphyxiating will incarnate, The hope of amnesty discarded. I hate what I have done to build the emptiness, Into walls I can't unmake and the prison fits. I fail again to break the fall. |
Kay. I'll start out by saying I'd like to keep this anger-free at the very least.
Basically what Reznub was trying to say was that you just seem very stereotypical. And, well, you are. I've been around and I've seen a LOT of people with pages just like yours. That's all he's saying.
No offense, but this is all very generic. I've seen it all before. I don't know how many people I've seen "dead inside" or "living in their nightmares."
I don't know you as a person, so I won't judge you as a person. But your work is all very familiar.
Seriously, lighten up a bit? Life is not to be taken seriously or it will do nothing but depress you.
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Icon: *ali-chan-otaku!
Bleed and Perfection are mere vents. My real work, such as my novel Lucidity, which I am working on, has not been posted for personal reasons. Truth be told, venting was only put on here for that purpose.
And I take life seriously because I constantly see it wasted. I am not depressed, or sad. Merely interested in the darker side of things, as the lighter side is always show-cased. I mean to be not like those pathetic whiner emo children. I simply like the dark side of things and wish to show this. As I have said, vents. They come from my fights with everyone around me, nothing more. I apologize if this seemed like nothing more then another emo child wanting attention. I do want attention, but on a different scale, one based off my novels, not my poems.
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I hate what I become,
When all I have is this.
And the weight collapses me,
As the numbness hits.
I fail again to break the fall.
I also like the darker things in life. What you and I interpret as dark is probably different though, as it is a matter of opinion.
And life being 'wasted' is just another reason NOT to take it seriously.
Know what I mean? But if you feel you ARE wasting your life, go out and make the most of it.
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Icon: *ali-chan-otaku!
And thank you for speaking sense instead of petty insults.
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I hate what I become,
When all I have is this.
And the weight collapses me,
As the numbness hits.
I fail again to break the fall.
You're welcome. Thanks for not blowing up on me, also.
And I'll keep an eye out.
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Icon: *ali-chan-otaku!
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I hate what I become,
When all I have is this.
And the weight collapses me,
As the numbness hits.
I fail again to break the fall.
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I hate what I become,
When all I have is this.
And the weight collapses me,
As the numbness hits.
I fail again to break the fall.
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